Just a Quick Note...

[jetpack_monkey]

My first episode of Heroes - "In Brightest Day, In Darkest Night (1.4)" - went up on Tuesday. The reason for the delay in announcing is that the Expanded Fic was posted just now, after a lot of insanity (mainly that it ended up being a 12,000 word behemoth written, for the most part, in a 48 hour period).

Anyway, please do enjoy!

Comments

[kittycat22.livejournal.com]

I very much enjoyed it! It took me a little while to figure out what was going on and get nice and unconfused, but once I did I was all "Whoa! Cool!" And a nice take on what happens when comic book geeks suddenly aquire superpowers. Heeheehee.

Also really enjoyed some of the character interaction. The Dawn/Angel stuff was excellent, as was some of the Scoobage there at the end. And your take on Gunn? Really excellent, I thought.

There were a few spots where I think the cut&paste got a little wonky. Lines kept repeating, it was odd!

[jetpack-monkey.livejournal.com]

Hm. Is possible. I'll take a look see and fixie. There were some issues with the cut/paste process.

[jetpack-monkey.livejournal.com]

Were you confused like, "Uh, what the hell?" or confused like "Ooh, what's going on here? I'm intrigued!" or some combination of the two?

Any and all feedback can only serve to make the series better.

And thank you so much for the kind words, yo.

[kittycat22.livejournal.com]

It was a combination of the two.

Kinda like "why do I care about some high school kids? Huh? But they are kinda neat...oooh..Nocturne. Evil. HURRYHURRYHURRRYWHAT'SGOINGON?!?! OOOH SLAYER." I was kinda slow to pick up on that. Heeheehee.

I am enjoying the series thoroughly. It's very feasible and just like reading actual episodes, which is very very nifty.